I agree with Fran. Your poem gave me the thought that God/Jesus/The Holy Spirit might sometimes also get tired of perfection. Or even the thought that all that perfection might make the Trinity feel - as the Brits - redundant.
I'm tempted to say this is perfect, but I did listen to your response to Jesus' perplexing direction, so I will just give a hearty thumbs up to your reflection.
I agree with Fran. Your poem gave me the thought that God/Jesus/The Holy Spirit might sometimes also get tired of perfection. Or even the thought that all that perfection might make the Trinity feel - as the Brits - redundant.
I'm tempted to say this is perfect, but I did listen to your response to Jesus' perplexing direction, so I will just give a hearty thumbs up to your reflection.
Thanks Fran. It's fun to think someone would say "perfect" to this poem.